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This still makes me inhale

This still makes me inhale quickly and hold tight; makes me wet.

Like I did the first day I read it.
Like I did that afternoon when I felt it.

Her bottom lip, her curve, my hand, the brush - you nailed every longing, anticipating, wanting detail.

Posted by Anonymous (not verified) on Thu, 05/21/2009 - 15:41